Mary and Her Lamb by Lilly

Mary and Her Lamb by Lilly

Connors 11 Sep 2018 00:12

Lilly, this one needs a fair bit of work.

AGAIN, 'i' is not a word ;)

Mary Had a Little Lamb in your description is a title. How do we punctuate titles?

The story is too short. The rhymes are good but I want to know why she traded it.

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